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Child Of God

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Down on my knees crying out

Lord knows I felt like

it was the end of the

WORLD

with broken heart

He told me to get up

and wipe my tears

away

My love isn’t worthy

I’m not ready for Love

Please don’t cry

Baby

I never thought it would

get this far

Im not worthy of you

You have a heart of GOLD

and you deserve so much

more.

Everytime I look into your

eye’s.

I see the Worth of you

and I regret all the lies

I told you

Baby

Don’t cry

I’m not worth your tears

please dry your face and take heed

to the words coming from my

mouth

I’m sorry but you deserve

so much more than me

I came into this relationship

base on lies, only looking

for one thing

But I saw the real you,

and I knew you were protected

Stop right there

don’t cry

Dry your tears and listen

You don’t deserve to be

treated like your nothing

Your more than I can give you

Your A Child Of God

1/23/12

PoeticJourney

 Thank Gabby & Everyone for helping me choose the title I have above! truly meant to a lot to me that so many have  help! God Bless 🙂

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I blog for many reasons, the love of writing, to inspire and touch someone life. No matter what I'm going through in my life. It's a get away when my SC becomes to much for me to handle. I love to get carry away in MY WORLD! I'm on a JOURNEY to discover myself. God Bless! :)

27 thoughts on “Child Of God”

      1. I’m doing okay, PJ; will keep you posted with any new news..for a title, here are some ideas…Dry Eyes, Dry Your Tears, Worthy Love, Love Not Worthy, Tears and Truth or Truth and Tears…I don’t know, just rambling, but maybe these and Gabby’s idea will help you come up with something! Hugs! 🙂

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      2. Lauren,

        thank you for letting me know how you doing. And thank you for keeping me in mind on the new news. You now I actually thought of Dry Your Tears. You threw in a lot of good ideas. Thanks for sharing. God Bless 🙂

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  2. I really like this PJ, sad but ended up being honest. Please don’t tell me it happened to you. 😦 I am wondering if it was on the Love Journey path? Well, it was a very emotional poem, with the guy doing the right thing. I was thinking of the title being “Child of God”, maybe? I am anxious to see if others have to say about the title, somebody could come up with a better one than me I am sure. It just seems to fit somehow and it’s a thought. 🙂 Hope you are doing OK tonight! Hugs

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    1. Thank You Gabby, for commenting and throwing in ideal for title. No, never happen to me, but who knows it could’ve happen to someone. I have had some tell me they didnt deserve me. I’m actually feeling the title Gabby 🙂 I shall keep that in mind. I can’t wait to others throw in ideas. Yes, I’m good tonight, just doing some homework right now. Was working on the poem a few days ago and decided to share it. I hope all is well on your end! God Bless 🙂

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  3. Hi, thank you so much for liking my poem. I agree with Gabby on the Title, Child of God. I was going to say that before I even saw her comment…Lol. I like how poems have a title and you don’t know why the poem is titled that until you read it in it’s entirety. That’s what I’m doing with One Key Too Late. I’m glad you liked it.

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    1. You very welcome! Thank you for your comment and throwing in the ideal about the title. Most of my poems, I write I don’t have title to the end. God Bless 🙂

      I must say i like that title One Key Too Late. 🙂

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  4. Sad but beautiful! I was thinking what Lauren said. “Dry Your Tears.” and my first thought was the same one Gabby chose.. “Child Of God”. I am sure what ever title you choose will be perfect.
    *Smiles*

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  5. Beautiful piece!
    All who truely know their worth
    would not compromise
    and those who try to prey on them
    will soon just reallise
    that just as it is simply put
    they’re all protected
    and time will gradually expose
    all their pranks and lies

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  6. Oh my God…. i would want to share this.. please… It so touches my heart.. The truth.. is when you show the real you, be true.. The Lord shall show you.. the way.. yes he will….It touches me alot…

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  11. Great title choice, all of you! journey, this is my favorite poem of yours so far. It tells so much truth of the heart in such an effective way, especially with the repetition of “don’t cry” dialogue and “I’m so sorry”–confession, request for forgiveness, love, and reassurance are all here. Praise be!

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    1. Granbee,

      thank you for your kind comment on my poem, truly touch my heart. I wasnt sure about sharing it at first, because I couldn’t think of a title at first, but it was heavy on my heart to share and I’m amaze with the turn out and the help I got for title, truly touch my heart! God Bless 🙂

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