Left me standing in the rain alone…
Told me I love you, but not enough
to walk away from the pass
You got me so Ice Cold…..
I been trying to warm myself
next to a warm body….
All I seem to do is freeze
’em, because I’m so Ice cold…
I had let you in….
You came to hurt me…
You succeeded..
Why you had to leave me
in the rain….
Why you couldn’t accept
me for me…
I was so cold, and you warm
me up….
Now I’m so Ice Cold…
Shivering….
When I see you,
my soul, heart, body, mind
turns Ice Cold
Might as well be dying
because I’m alive but feel
so helpless
I’m so Ice Cold
please call 911…
I’m not going to make it…
Breathe…
up and down…
in and out…
up and down…
in and out…
Move slowly now…
up…..
down….
in….
out…
I’m gone….
SO Ice Cold!
7/13/09
PoeticJourney
Another poem from my past I wanted to share… Part of my Love Journey and lets just say I have learned a lot while on my JOURNEY.
Poets Afterthought 
oh i am posting this to my fb page 🙂
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Knock yourself out. One of my favorties to be honest. 🙂
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I really felt this one. very painful and yet that’s how I felt a month ago. Well written my friend. Very emotional and real. 🙂
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Ty Sherline, im so glad you dont feel that way anymore! God Bless 🙂
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Great post thanks. I really enjoyed it very much.
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This is so intense and very emotional; Wonderful writing, PJ!
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Ty Lauren!
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nice blog u hav
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Ty!
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AWESOME poem PJ! I’m sure many of us can relate to moments reflected in it. I’m putting on my fb page too
God bless u, hugs
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Ty Scott and you right about many of us feeling that way! God Bless U:)
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Hmmm… I felt the same thing just recently! Would definitely keep this one. Thanks for posting it!!
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Hi April, sorry to hear that! Ty for commenting! God Bless 🙂
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I want to reach out and hug you back to warmth and comfort when I read this. Such honest and desciptive sharing. You are VERY brave!
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Aww ty for your kindness! God Bless U
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I feel the strong emotions from each lines, truly touch my heart … I can relate to it…
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The cold a love can leave is sometimes so hard to understand. Well written. Definitely left me in complete understanding of the emotion.
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ty for your kind comment! You right it can be hard to understand! I Hope All Is Well With You 🙂
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