I’m gone…
U did it…
I walk…
U messed up…
It don’t matter….
I already said bye
u said whatever…
It don’t matter…
I’m a G…
N I know its killing you cause I don’t care…
I tried to care, but all I saw was you doing yo thing…
So I bounce & I’m good on my own…
I don’t care cause I never really love you…
I don’t care, I know you can tell now..
Everytime we talk it’s whatever n however..
And you like it wasnt even like that…
What we had wasnt anything serious
it was a journey & now its over…
I’m walking away…
Trust I’m never coming back…
I promise you these…
U had me once & now you lost me…
I died the night you screwed me over…
Did u see the blood in your hands…?
it was my soul…
Did you hear the screams in the back of you head?
It was me but you was so caught up you didn’t even give
a care…
I’m not mad… I’m just over it & I’m so gone…
It honestly don’t matter n
I honestly don’t care about you
3/10/10
PoeticJourney
As you can see this poem was writen a few years ago, and since I’m on a JOURNEY I wanted to share it. I may go back and forth and share poems from the past present and whatnot. I learn to deal with things a little differntly I can honestly say I’m glad I got a better understanding and relationship with GOD.
Poets Afterthought 
wow… feels like you reached in and saw my soul. That’s how I felt about someone a few weeks ago..actually more like last month. The feelings you wrote here feels like how I felt about someone specifically but yeah, I felt like “I’m so done with all the drama, just get out of my life”. Healing is still the path I’m walkin’ on to get over it.You truly capture the spirit of these emotions so well. Totally love what you wrote here. it’s so raw and real that I am able to feel.
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Ty! Im sorry you experience the same as me! He always told me I had away with words. My poetry is me, my feelings and I know im not the only who feels them! You going to recover,you a strong woman! God Bless U:)
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I am sorry you had to experience such sadness PJ, but like you say it really is a journey. You are much stronger and God is working in your life! Thank you for sharing.
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Ty for your kind words, and yes I’m glad his working in my life. God Is Good. God Bless U:)
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i fell like this often times when i meet some one i really like and there not in to me as much as i am in to them… i find that this poem is perfect for the feelings i am felling right now! great writing!
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Ty for your comment and visit. Aww sorry you feeling like this right now. God Bless U:)
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This is so universally expressed and very contemporary in style. Very effective in communicating the “sour grapes” reaction that often turns on after a broken relationship. Very well done!
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Ty for your comnent! God Bless:)
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This is very raw with emotion and wonderfully written! I, too, am sorry you had to experience this, but I believe these tough times all stepping stones to greatness. (if only I could believe what I’m telling you, today! ) Sigh~
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Ty for your comment. I dont know what you going through you going to make it. It make us stronger, even when we dont believe it at that moment! God Bless U! Im praying for you!
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You’re welcome and thank you soooo much! (hugs)
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Yvw! Sending hug & prayers your way! God Bless U:)
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I enjoyed this immensely. You just never know how your actions and words affect someone.
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Ty for visiting and comment and you so right about that! God Bless U:)
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Oh no problem. I subscribed so I will be visiting more often lol. God bless you too! 🙂
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Ty for joinin my JOURNEY! I believe im following you and if not im coming back over to follow! God Bless:)
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