My Eye’s ‘R’ Finally Open
Now I know the truth
he really doesn’t love me.
But deep down I knew,
just wasn’t ready to accept the
truth.
Now that my Eye’s ‘R’ Finally Open
I’m giving GOD the Praise
If it wasn’t for you
I’ll still be betraying myself.
I thank GOD
for opening my Eye’s
6/24/12
~PJ~
Poem will be dedicated to my Love Journey! So Do Enjoy! Not sure on the title, so if any of my kind readers have any ideals please do share! God Bless 🙂
I have a song to go with the poem I like to share with you all, actually came across the video today and well it broke my heart because the words r so true. I have it coming in another post!
Poets Afterthought 
It’s a very good poem PJ and kind of sad, but it’s how the Love Journey goes right? For the title stick with My Eyes “R” Finally Open cause it makes sense to me. Wonder what other kind readers will have to say?
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Gabby,
You know thats what I was thinking as well about the title of the poem. I agree about it bn sad. What a Love Journey right? Ty for your comment, I know I can count on you when it comes to titles. God Bless 🙂
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I agree-my eyes “r” open seems fitting. Great share today!
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Thank you LadyLovelyL:)
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Now I see. Nice piece.
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Thank you, was that ideal for title as well? If so I like it! I’m actually in bed now, not feeling my best! Haiku got me all confuse and I sike myself out! Type it up and all! 😦
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Sorry I’m responding in the am. I was in bed also. Yes title suggestion. “Now I See”.
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I truly understand, no reason to say sorry. Im so feeling that title. Hope all is well on your end! God Bless 🙂
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Very good, PJ, how about “Seeing and Believing” or simply “Eyes” or “Eyes that See”
some other ideas to ponder over…xo
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Ty Lauren, gave me more titles to think of! God Bless 🙂
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I think “at last” or “finally I see” or “In the end”…. nice write 🙂
How is that cold of yours PJ?
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Thank you for the comment J, means a lot coming from and as well as some good titles. Oh my I actually got so many to choose from! Its awful Im waiting for it to go away. I have doctor appointment to see my main doctor Monday, so I see what he can give me if its not gone by then! How you feeling?
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