his lies destroyed me
his honesty heals me
he destroyed everything in me
he replace every piece that was
once broken in me
The way he love was poison
to me
It took a man of GOD to open
my eyes to real love
2/17/12
PoeticJourney
Actually true story,dedicated to my Love Journey! Do Enjoy!
As you see I have no title for this poem, if you have any ideal, do let me know. God Bless 🙂
The contrasts made it clear, wonderfully written.
A title that stood out to me instantly was: It took a man of God
♥
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Bipolarmuse,
Thank you for your comment and I truly like the way you think! I like that title, believe I’ll go with that one! I do hope all is well with you! God Bless 🙂
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I agree. It took a man of god, is my vote. I hope things are well. Peace. Res
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Thank you Res, I do hope all is well on your end! I’m staying strong! God Bless 🙂
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I love this poem and love the title, a very good choice! 🙂 All the steps that you’ve taken on your Love Journey PJ are just amazing and wondering what will happen next! Hoping you are feeling better today, you have some healing to do I know. Will be keeping you in my prayers as always! 🙂
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Gabby,
Thank you, I actually had to do some thinking on this poem when I wrote it to be honest, so I can see it actually came out good! I can’t wait to see what happen next myself Gabby! I’m curious! I was working on My Love Journey, but got inspired to share a poem instead! thank you for the prayers, feeling a little better then I was lastnight. Just really stuck with the annoying headaches! I do hope all is well on your end! God Bless 🙂
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The only suggestion I have for a title for this poem is; “How the Hurts Healed”. This man in your life seems like a spiritual surgeon for you! Hallelujah!
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OOOOOO I love that title, I might have to use that for another title later in the future Granbee! I have another poem in the making! God Bless 🙂 Thank You
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I have nominated you for the Versatile Blogger award…please see https://lamehousewife.wordpress.com/2012/02/17/me-the-versatile-blogger-thank-you-gjscobie/
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Oh wow thank you for nomination! Congration! God Bless 🙂
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you’re welcome
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I love the contrast in this poem, too, PJ, and your chosen title is perfect! I hope you’ve had a good day and are feeling better…healing hugs and prayers coming your way~xx
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Lauren,
Thank you for your lovely comment! My day has been up and down day, so thank you for your prayers! God Bless 🙂
I hope you had a lovely day! 🙂
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What a lovely poem 🙂 I really love it! Thanks for sharing it and I’m hoping your headache goes away. I see you told Gabby you have one. I get stress headaches off and on, not fun at all. You just take care. Hugs and God bless you always.
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Thank you Autumn 🙂 Its been coming and going all day long today! I do hope all is well on your end! God Bless 🙂
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Beautiful poem PJ!
I hope your love journey is forever prosperous and with God at the center
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Thank You Scott! 🙂 God Bless You 🙂
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