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Broken Soul

You know his soul…
cried out..
He scream my name…
warning me to not
to leave him..
I couldn’t feel nothing..
cause of my soul
had died..
and I kill his soul..
I couldn’t even cry, cause…
my heart wouldn’t let me feel…
I saw his pain..
but did I care..
I wanted him so bad..
cause he touch my heart..
in more ways than one..
I thought I was ready..
but I was wrong…
He never hurted me..
he kept his word..
I was the one that..
broke his spirit..
He had my soul on fire…
Gave me the world…
What did I do?
I left..
Walk out in the rain..
Felt no regret..
No remorse..
I knew I was doing the right thing..
My soul was at peace…

7/29/07

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Another poem from my past and wanted to share with ya’ll. Its part of my LoveΒ Journey, thingsΒ I learn about myself. I believer every relationship show us things, even if we dont understand at the time. Wow is all I can say after reading the poem, I really wasn’t at a good place when I wrote it. I have come along way. Thank God for that! πŸ™‚

Author:

I blog for many reasons, the love of writing, to inspire and touch someone life. No matter what I'm going through in my life. It's a get away when my SC becomes to much for me to handle. I love to get carry away in MY WORLD! I'm on a JOURNEY to discover myself. God Bless! :)

24 thoughts on “Broken Soul

  1. It’s amazing to see how your poetry has evolved over time. The journey takes you to new places in your heart. I believe that you’ve learned a lot and have gained some wisdom in your love journey. Thanks for sharing. πŸ™‚

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    1. Sherline,
      Thank you for your comment, yes I have learn a lot, but never consider it that I gained wisdom on my Love Journey. I love that I can see were I was and where Im going! Many Blessings πŸ™‚

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  2. Wow, this poem shows something else, you were very talented in 2007 and still are, it’s awesome to see the difference. But even more awesome is seeing Him use your talent to encourage others. Keep giving what He gave you to share. God is so good.

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  3. Broken Soul was a touching poem. Sometimes you just KNOW. I can picture you walking out in the rain – no remorse.

    Happy new year πŸ™‚ N.

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    1. Wordsfallfrommyeyes,

      what a name, i like it. Thank You for your comment and wow you could really picture it. Happy New Year to you and yours. God Bless πŸ™‚

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  4. Goodbye world, I stay no longer with you. I have made up my mind to go God’s way for the rest of my life. Thanks again P.J. for taking me on your poetic journey. God bless.

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  5. amazing! nice one. how you write into a beautiful poem. Anyway, happy new year. πŸ™‚ love reading your poem

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  6. You got it, journey–your soul was peace, you knew you were doing the right thing. I really like the way you move from the complex to the simple here.

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    1. Thank you Lauren,aww feel so bad you got so much catching up to do. I havent even move half of my blogs over yet. Im hoping to have it all over here before May! lol πŸ™‚

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      1. I am normally a very organized person, but I’m not sure about time management with family, work, blogging, reading, writing…I have about 150 emails to go through and I really can’t read everything, but I’m trying my best. I’m not complaining either, very grateful for everything…I could ignore my family for a long time, but that wouldn’t be the wisest thing to do, either! πŸ™‚

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      2. So true it would be not be the wisest thing. I still have some emails to go through and to be honest it may take me to early next week since I’m tryin to get my grades up and gpa up to topnotch. Yea I dont believe you get to read all the post I made while you was on vocation and thats understandable. Just do what you can and we truly understand. πŸ™‚ God Bless You:)

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      3. Awww I bet they keep you busy as well. Yes, I been at this for awhile and this is somethng I want so it comes first regardless of anythingelse. Awww how cute and thats good. You a wonderful person, so I know you good mom. πŸ™‚

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  7. P.S. Now the tables have turned; my kids are telling “me” I’ve been on the computer too long! What a hoot! πŸ™‚ But, they’re proud of their mom, too, so it’s all good!

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