You the one that got away
You the only one for me
You the one that complete me
The love of my life
My angel
My shoulda, coulda, woulda
You need to know how deep
Is my love for you?
All my life
I prayed for a man like you
Without you
I’m nothing
You my future
The love of my life
My Best friend
The one to knock me down
When it gets rough
You My Everything
My sun on a rainy
Day
My heart
My back bone
What would I do without you?
I’m missing you
Every hour, second, minute
You the one for me.
11/1/10
PoeticJourney
I’m working on a title if anyone have ideal I would love to hear it. I have a few but for some odd reason it doesn’t fit it, or maybe I’m overthinking it all.
Ahh, I can relate to the sentiments expressed in this piece… cool, I like it 🙂
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Ty for your comment! I wasnt sure If it was finish for the longest. God Bless 🙂
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Lovely words from a beautiful soul. 🙂
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Aww ty Sherline! Means a lot coming from you! God Bless 🙂
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Now u know I can relate. Very nice.
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I figure you would, ty! God Bless 🙂
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Very nicely written : )
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Ty! God Bless 🙂
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Beautiful! And the first line changes the entire meaning. With the first line the emotion is looking back in regret, without the first line your heart is aching for the perfect one yet to come. It could be expanded to show that progression from hurt to hope. Potential titles with the first line: (the guy’s name), Sobbing Heart, Broken Heart. Potential titles without the first line: Jesus, Deep Ache, Gentle Tears. ~ Grace and peace in His arms.
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Ty for commenting and you know you so right about the first line! I kept looking at it for the longest and couldnt put my finger on it! Ty for suggestion for title! God Bless 🙂
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simply beautiful….
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Ty for your comment! God Bless 🙂
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The need is expressed so well, the urgency/desperation. A lovely read. Thank you for sharing 🙂
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Ty for commenting, glad to hear you like! God Bless
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Love so beautifully expressed! 🙂
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Ty Lauren! 🙂
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My mystery lover would be a good title.You can’t feel Him, you can’t see Him–but you know he is there. And most of all He is always there when you need Him.
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I love that title, beautiful! Ty! God Bless 🙂
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I like this 🙂
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Ty Eliza! God Bless U:)
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this is very lovely and romantic piece PJ … love it!
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Ty willofheart! God Bless 🙂
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