Posted in Love, Love Journey, poem, Poetry

Missing You

You the one that got away

You the only one for me

You the one that complete me

The love of my life

My angel

My shoulda, coulda, woulda

You need to know how deep

Is my love for you?

All my life

I prayed for a man like you

Without you

I’m nothing

You my future

The love of my life

My Best friend

The one to knock me down

When it gets rough

You My Everything

My sun on a rainy

Day

My heart

My back bone

What would I do without you?

I’m missing you

Every hour, second, minute

You the one for me.

11/1/10

PoeticJourney

I’m working on a title if anyone have ideal I would love to hear it. I have a few but for some odd reason it doesn’t fit it, or maybe I’m overthinking it all.

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I blog for many reasons, the love of writing, to inspire and touch someone life. No matter what I'm going through in my life. It's a get away when my SC becomes to much for me to handle. I love to get carry away in MY WORLD! I'm on a JOURNEY to discover myself. God Bless! :)

22 thoughts on “Missing You

  1. Beautiful! And the first line changes the entire meaning. With the first line the emotion is looking back in regret, without the first line your heart is aching for the perfect one yet to come. It could be expanded to show that progression from hurt to hope. Potential titles with the first line: (the guy’s name), Sobbing Heart, Broken Heart. Potential titles without the first line: Jesus, Deep Ache, Gentle Tears. ~ Grace and peace in His arms.

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    1. Ty for commenting and you know you so right about the first line! I kept looking at it for the longest and couldnt put my finger on it! Ty for suggestion for title! God Bless 🙂

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  2. My mystery lover would be a good title.You can’t feel Him, you can’t see Him–but you know he is there. And most of all He is always there when you need Him.

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