They tell a story of what
I been through
shows my pain,frustration
They hide so many things,
but not the intensity of
my pain, that sends me away
from my love ones
Look Into My Eye’s
What do you see?
Do you see inside my soul?
Do you see my heart crying out?
Make sure you don’t stare,
just be honest and let me
know when they change.
Look Into My Eye’s
They betrays me at times
So many time’s
I had to cover up and push on
Look Into My Eye’s
Tell me what you see?
1/3-4/12
PoeticJourney
The poem is inspired by my illness. With Sickle Cell Anemia, my eye’s or normally yellow, but when I’m feeling bad there turns a little more yellow. That is when I have to worry, and drink my liquid. Let me tell you feels like I’m drinking too much water. lol
Poets Afterthought 
It really is such a good poem, it expresses so much emotion and your feelings PJ. Thank you for sharing, I just keep praying for your illness to be healed.
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Thank You Gabby, something I been thinking on for awhile and went with it. You such a beautiful soul 🙂 You welcome and thank you for the prayers! God Bless 🙂
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Gabby said that so well 🙂 I’m glad you’re sharing. I’ll keep praying, you’ve had so much pain and illness you need healed!
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Awww thank you Autumn and thank you for praying for me still.. God Bless You 🙂
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I feel the intensity, PJ, and just know you have many praying for you each day! Blessings to you, my friend!
Lauren xx
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Thank You Lauren for been a good friend and praying for me. God Bless 🙂
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PJ,
I am partial to this poem, I believe the eyes are the key to life…this was a beautiful post, well done, keep up the blessings you are pouring out cuz they are flowing around the world with lightning speed my dear friend. -WATW
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Thank you WATW for your comment, I believe the eyes shows so much and hide so little. We only can hide just enough from other peoples! God Bless 🙂
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Honesty and warmth i dont even have to look into your eyes …they are there in every word every leaf of your blog..but those eyes which lead me to your soul and heart are blessed.. for nothing could corrupt them….hugs:-)
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Soma,
Thank you for your kind words! God Bless You 🙂
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eyes that take me
deeper than the seas
eyes won’t escape me
weak in my knees
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Oh, and good poem PJ! 😀
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Alright Now Scott, and thank you for the comment! I believe that poem can go in many directions. 🙂
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Such an endearing way to request honest feedback from ones who care about you, journey! We hug you!
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Granbee,
thank you for the hug, I do hope all is well on your end… God Bless 🙂
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touching
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I see a person who is on a poetic journey–spreading love and happiness. Thanks
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Aww Thank You Noel, you very welcome. God Bless 🙂
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This is beautiful! You are so right. So often, we push our fears and pains back and smile to others. We bury it deep inside. I love your creativity. Well said!
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Thank You Christine for your kind comment! 🙂
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