You care if you only
here for a season…
Dont tell me
You want to be here
if you only feel sorry
I don’t need you Just,
Dont tell me
you love me,
when u don’t mean it
Dont tell me
You care cause that’s what
you think I want to hear
Dont tell me
You sorry,
cause we both know da truth
DOnt tell me
something you think
I want to hear…
2/19/08
PoeticJourney
Another ole poem dedicated to my Love Journey!
Poets Afterthought 
This is a good poem PJ, as always your good ole Love Journey is up and down! 🙂 I also wanted to tell you, your very last post Love Journey 10 isn’t showing up! Wonder what is up with that?
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Thank You Gabby, yea I wasn’t finish with it, so I had to remove it. Hopefully tomorrow I’ll have it worded the correct way. I done change my question for p.10 I don’t know how many time’s. sad I know! lol.
Yea I want to share the good and the bad with ya’ll. Its not always going to be good just like its not always going to be bad. I’m so ready to start sharing another true story with you all. I actually have two in mind, so watch out for them. God Bless 🙂
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i imagine hearing your voice reading this… i like it
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Thank You! 🙂
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journey, this is a refrain all we ladies WISH we had spoken so effectively to those “passing though” guys scamming us with their sweet words! In addition, I think this poem is a “finished” one, very complete in content, rhythm, and refrain.
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Granbee,
Thank you for your kind words… :)God Bless 🙂
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A deep work, exploding with pent emotion and human dynamics. Wonderfully done
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Thank You Vampire for coming through and your lovely comment! God Bless 🙂
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So well expressed, PJ…these feelings we all relate to, just be honest~ xx
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Lauren, Thank you for your lovely comment! I seem to put so much emotion in my work, honestly thats the best way I express myself! God Bless 🙂
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