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Where were you

You promise me

You’ll never leave me

When I was in need

You betrayed my trust

I lost my way

My heart couldn’t forgive


My love went downhill

Where were you

You promise me

You’ll stay by my side

Whenever I needed you

You betrayed me

Now you’ll missing me

& wanting me back

I kept my word

I was there

But you didn’t stay

True to me

Where were you

I’m glad you showed me

Your true colors

It gave me time to

Hear God speaking to me

So I’m thanking

You for betraying me


Kept his word

He never left my side

Where were you?

You was where you

 was supposed to be

You betrayed me

He heal me

I was lost

He found me

You broke me

He fix me

You knock me down

He lifted me up


Is good

he never lets me down


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When everyone lets you down, GOD is always there for you even when you think you alone. Sometimes we go through different things in our life, so we can hear him speak to us.


I blog for many reasons, the love of writing, to inspire and touch someone life. No matter what I'm going through in my life. It's a get away when my SC becomes to much for me to handle. I love to get carry away in MY WORLD! I'm on a JOURNEY to discover myself. God Bless! :)

22 thoughts on “Where were you

      1. I’m doing OK, my cold is getting better and thank you for asking! I think it goes with our weather here in the winter, but I am not complaining. How have you been feeling PJ? I hope you are getting your rest and behaving yourself! 🙂


      2. Glad to hear you doing ok, yea believe its like that everywhere during this time of year. Me behaving? Always 🙂 I’m doing good, not feeling my best but not going to stress and make it worse then what it is. I’m taking care of myself, just getting ready to start my classes again tomorrow. God Bless 🙂

        Thank you for asking how I was doing as well. what a friend for? to ask how each other or doing…


    1. Yes, I know exactly what you mean Domestic and I’m sorry you going through it and thank you for your comment. Yea I saw that and was surprise to see my name on your list since I haven’t been here that long. God Bless 🙂


      1. Glad to hear you doing fine, yea I believe you going to be busy for awhile in the catch up department. lol I’m having a okay day, so can’t complain! God Bless 🙂


  1. Great one Poetic. Yes, people will always let us down, but how we react them is what makes or breaks us. Sometimes situations likes these, as painful as they are, are a blessing. How will we know whats good and great, if we dont experience the bad?
    Have a good day 🙂
    Hugs xxx


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