Take hold of my hand
Dont you dare let go
I have a message
for you to receive
I know you struggling
and you on the verge
of giving up
I’m here to let you know!
Take hold of my hand
and follow me
I know you think you
alone
I want you to know
You never alone
GOD is here
yes, he never left you
even when you turn
your back on him
Killed your body
with drugs & alcohol
No, No,No
Don’t let go just yet
Follow me & listen
so many times you had to
go hungry because
you didn’t want to live
right
you had to sit in the cold
because of your pride
Don’t you dare let go
of my hand
I’m not finish
Take heed to what
I’m saying
You fighting the wrong
person
You running the wrong way
GOD is everywhere
Don’t you ever think he
forgot you when you
think you alone
He loves you
Today choose him to
serve
Tomorrow not promise
Now let go of my hand
& pray
1/31/12
PoeticJourney
Actually true story in this poem here, I’m not happy with it because I feel like I’m missing something. But if you struggling and feel like you alone. Just remember you not. Do enjoy and God Bless 🙂
Poets Afterthought 
A wonderful poem. And God never leaves us, but it’s hard to fully accept that God forgives and loves unconditionally until we can first forgive and learn to love ourselves. That’s why it’s so important for people like you to remind us. Thank you. 🙂
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Thank You Rumpydog for your kind comment! And you so right! God Bless 🙂
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P.J, you are a natural born poet but I don’ think you realize how talented you are. You use your imagination cleverly to create images that all of us can relate to. Those of us who read your poems can always tell when you are serious and when you are not. I would like to take the liberty to say, not only should you cherish you talent, but you should also value it.
Thanks for sharing. God bless
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Thank You Noel for your kind comment, truly touch my heart and made me smile. 🙂 Sometimes I’m not sure about how my work sounds, so I take my time to share it! God Bless You 🙂
You welcome, thank you for readng! 🙂
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No, Never alone, even when you think every friend you ever had has turned their back on you for your choices, God don’t judge like they do. Thank you for the reminder today. God bless.-Ash
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Ashleigh,
Thank God he always there even when we think we alone. You very welcome, thank you for visiting! God Bless 🙂
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Actually this is something I needed to read today. Feeling down at the moment but thank you for sharing 😉
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Sherline,
sorry to hear you not feeling your best. You need someone to talk to I’m here for you. God Bless 🙂
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I’m so loving this! Keep up the good work!
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Thank You for your kind words! Glad you enjoyed it! God Bless 🙂
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journey, you have GOD holding your hand, you have all of us out here loving you and praying for you by the power of the Holy Spirit. By the way, I really enjoyed the rhythms, the honesty, and the language of this poem.
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Thank You Granbee, I’m so glad to know he never let us go. I just hope so many thats like the poem, soon realize it as well. This poem was inspired by true events going on in many people life. Its so close to home with me I just had to share it. All we can do is keep praying for them ! God Bless 🙂
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This really is a wonderful poem PJ, please know that you are very gifted with your words. They reach so many people, so no need to doubt yourself and the poem is just perfect the way it is. Very good message and I know it will touch many! We are never alone when we are struggling, God is with us and a very comforting reminder for us PJ. Thank you for writing this and sharing! 🙂
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Thank You Gabby for your kind words, truly touch my heart. You welcome glad to hear you enjoyed it! God Bless 🙂
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