Does he love me?
his action and words
show me he does
Does he love me?
The way I love him?
I ask myself day after day
If we going to make it?
Does he love me?
The way I deserve to be
love?
He loves me not
I have the bruises
to prove it
I have pictures to
show for it
He loves me not
take a trip
through My Love Journey
read few of my pieces
and you be the judge
Does he love me?
he loves me not
Does he love me?
he loves me not
What a waste to destroy
such a beautiful
flower
When I know deep
down he doesn’t
love me like I
should be love
1/26/12
PoeticJourney
Don’t really like the poem, but wanted to share it with you all, actually sort of got inspire by My Lovely Friend Gabby from a post she did http://autumnsunshineandgabrielleangel.wordpress.com/2012/01/26/he-loves-me-he-loves-me-not-by-gabby/. I believe this piece need so much work on it, but wanted to share! I have so many questions and stories to share for my love journey. It’s not all about my life but some of the crazy but wonderful loving people in my life.
Poets Afterthought 
I really love this poem PJ! 🙂 It speaks of the whole “he loves me, he loves me not” experience. Wondering why you don’t like it because it’s wonderful, it is! It was so sweet of you to mention this was inspired by my post about the daisy game. You are such a blessing and lovely friend yourself PJ! I love also how you said in the poem, what a waste to destroy a beautiful flower. The whole poem is so good, have confidence and believe that sweetie! This Love Journey of yours is a wild ride and glad I am buckled in for the whole long ride!! 🙂 Hugs!
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Awww Gabby, thank you for your kind words, I even went back to get the link so I could link it back to your post. I read it over and over and some how I’m starting to love it more & more. I’m glad you here for long ride, I can’t wait to see where it ends to be honest 🙂 I couldn’t think of nothingelse to call it but Questions. So many go through relationships asking the same questions I mention above and so many more. I just hope it did the poem justices! You 2 kind Gabby 🙂 God Bless
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A beautiful, conflicted display of emotions. Wonderfully done
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Thank You Vampire Weather 🙂
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wow… this question… this question… i bet…80% of us ask this same question…..I love the way you play with the words, and yet it goes deep…
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Thank you, I believe you right a lot of us do ask the same question. God Bless 🙂
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You are so wonderful at empathizing with the love journeys of others. Bless you!
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Thank You for reading and leaving such a kind comment Granbee 🙂
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I know you aren’t satisfied with this one, PJ, but I love it…it conveys what is felt at some time on our “relationship” roller coaster rides in our lives and it’s so filled with emotion~
Great job! xx
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Lauren,
it starting to grow on me to be honest. So thank you for your comment, truly means a lot! God Bless 🙂
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Lauren,
it starting to grow on me to be honest. So thank you for your comment, truly means a lot! God Bless 🙂
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I love it because it’s REAL! These are questions we have all asked ourselves at one point in time. Someone needed to read this and I’m glad you posted it.
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Thank you! God Bless 🙂
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