She carry the weight of
the world on her shoulders
Have you ever came across
A Strong Woman?
She never complains
always doing what she got
to do, to take care of home
Going to Work
Getting an Education
to show their little ones
MOMMY may be doing it
alone
but to never give up
when seem like the
WORLD
is talking about you being
alone
I may be a single mother
but I’m doing what I
need to do to get by
Can you say the same?
A Strong Woman
1/8/12
PoeticJourney
This poem got inspired by a few ladies I know and some I had a chance to get to know when I was so addicted to playing the games on Facebook. It was longer poem, but I’m thinking about breaking it down! Do Enjoy it and let me know what you think! I must say feel like I left something out.
Poets Afterthought 
I think it’s perfect, just as it is – as are you PJ 🙂
I like that it’s succinct. It portrays your message very clearly. Cool writing!
LikeLike
Thank You Angela for your kind words. God Bless YOu:)
LikeLike
I Love It girl. Having the will of not giving up even when life seems so unfair. A strong woman looks at the unfair circumstances in the face and refuses to be beaten down by them. 🙂
LikeLike
Thank You! that they do, have come across a lot of them in my life. Don’t worry its more to come for us Strong Women! God Bless You 🙂
LikeLike
I love it, PJ 🙂 it’s so true and such a super poem 🙂
LikeLike
Thank You Autumn, for some odd reason, I feel like I leave something out of your name. God Bless 🙂
LikeLike
This is just awesome the way it is PJ, I love it! So many strong women out there, it’s good to acknowledge them. Nice writing PJ and I don’t think you should change it. 🙂
LikeLike
Aww thank you Gabby! 🙂 Got inspired to write it before church, actually while I was getting ready for church! lol God Bless 🙂
LikeLike
I don’t think it was too long. I wanted more! 🙂
It reminds me of a quote I love
You never know how strong you are
until strength is all you have left.
-author unkown
Thank you for the inspiration. It was great.
LikeLike
Christine,
Thank You for your comment it was longer, until I decided to break it down. I like that quote as well. Glad to hear you enjoyed it! God Bless 🙂
LikeLike
I love this! I really enjoyed how you presented the strong woman as someone who moves ahead in life and sacrifices herself for her children, even though this loneliness surrounds her. Strong woman indeed!
LikeLike
Thank you for your comment! I was hoping it would come out that way. 🙂
LikeLike
Perfect words giving strength and hope to women
God Bless
susie
LikeLike
Thank You Susie! God Bless 🙂
LikeLike
You ARE strong. You WILL conquer. Your children will rise up and call you blessed, as it foretells in Proverbs, final chapter. Also, just a little footnote: sometimes, it also requires a very strong woman to do all this WITHIN a marriage, even a very good marriage. In some ways, it is more complicated, though possibly not as continuously exhausting.
LikeLike
Granbee
thank you for your comment and you so right. I will be adding more to the poem, but restarting the poem where I left off at maybe. i havent forgot the marriage part. Thats my next step I believe. God Bless 🙂
and you right about the marriage. My mom is living proof
LikeLike
It’s perfect, PJ, and an awesome tribute to the strong women “out there!”
LikeLike
Thank You Lauren 🙂 I’m actually in the working process part
LikeLike
Reblogged this on poeticjourney251.
LikeLike