Let me in
KNOCK KNOCK!
Open
Let me in
KNOCK KNOCK!
Open your heart & let me in
~ Listen~
To my words
I’m speaking to you.
Yes, you
You, you
When you going to let me in?
KNOCK KNOCK!
Quit looking around because
I’m talking to your heart!
WORD TO THE WISE
You know you not going
To live forever
How many love ones
You going to see leave the
World before you take his words
To heart.
So open your ears & and take heed
To the truth
His word will never change!
Next time you hear someone say your name
Say Yes Lord
I hear you
11/28/10
PoeticJourney
I can’t get the end to work just right! I love inputs so any ideas do leave me some feedback! God Bless 🙂
Poets Afterthought 
This is just beautiful PJ! 🙂
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Aww ty Gabby! Had added more, but it didnt sound right, well one part didn’t so I took it out and left it just like it is.. 🙂
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Simple yet thought-provoking! That’s so you, lol 🙂
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Aww tyvm for your kind comment! God Bless 🙂
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Beautiful and direct, PJ, one of my favorites! 🙂
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Aww ty Lauren, sounds like its perfect just the way it is then. 🙂 ty for your comment..
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Yes, it is and you’re very welcome! 🙂
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🙂
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You have very accurately captured the atmosphere of Jesus standing at our heart’s door and knocking, knocking knocking–never, ever forcing his way in! Bless for this poem. It has added real value to my life today.
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Aww so glad to hear you or touch by my poem! God Bless 🙂
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Perfect dear….!!!
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Ty Maureen! 🙂
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Death can bring us closer to our mortality and the One who has offered a plan of salvation. Great Post
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Thank You Jillian! God Bless You 🙂
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