I’m laying in bed
Catching up on facebook status
So many losing someone they love
Time is not promise to no one
I think of the song by
MJ: Gone to SOON
We ask ourselves
Why they leave us
I didn’t tell them I love them
One more time
If only I could just touch them
See they smiling faces
I know life isn’t promises to anyone
It breaks my heart to read about
How someone choose to
End another person life
One person waiting on
Confirmation on a
Love one
They know they not going to make it
All they have is memories, pictures
Death Is All Around Us
Make me think back
When I was in the hospital
The nurse told me she lost a patient
It hurts to lose someone
Another young lady just lost her
Grandfather, just told my friend
Sorry for her lost and she in my prayers
And that we love her
Death Is around Us
11/13/11
PoeticJourney
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This is really nice poetic i love it. Nice write.
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Ty Chaotic! 🙂
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A lot of truth this poem…beautifully written.
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Ty David for your kind words! God Bless:)
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Really well written. A reminder that we are living on borrowed time.
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Exactly! Kinda More Eye Opener For Me! Do You is Long but sorta talks about well my story/journey! Ty for your kind words!God Bless
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wow…I find that death is something that I find difficult to contemplate about on a personal basis…call it avoidance or me being in denial but Tarisai you are right…we are living on borrowed time…it’s what we do with it that counts. Beautiful post.
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You know the name was orginal Death All Around Us! But death isnt something everyone want to hear or read about! Ty for your comment! 🙂
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Yes. –So damn TRUE. It’s all around us.
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You wrote about this wonderfully! Our family can relate..in the past decade, we’ve known 6 close friends and family members who have passed away, mostly of cancer, 1 teen suicide and 1 teen heart attack. Very tragic, to say the least. My kids are growing up with death around them much more than my husband and I ever did. It’s so sad, yet, a very real part of life. On a happier note, keep up the great writing! 🙂
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Ty for your comment and sorry they experiencing it! Its so sad and heartbreaking and I may experience some in my life! Im praying, thats all I can do right now! God Bless 🙂
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Hi PJ,
I have now nominated you for the Leibsters Award, too, I just have to! So please check out my blog when you get a chance: http://lscotthoughts.com/2011/11/20/my-third-nomination-very-honored
Lauren 🙂
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Aww Lauren ty so much for thinking of much! Im honor! You so deserve it! God Bless 🙂
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🙂 🙂 🙂
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