The way he cares,
truly touch me
He sings, from his heart
making sure to leave a
mark on my beating heart
Sound of Angel
that takes me high
What A Music Man
I have…
I love the way you care
drives me sane when
you cater to my heart
My Love for you
is the drumming
of my heart.
Making music with you
is dream come true.
2/28/12
PoeticJourney
As you can see I have no title as of yet, and poem has been on my mind lately. Basically rough draft I may add more or tweak it! As of right now, sleep is truly calling me. So do let me know what you think! Enjoy and I believe I’ll dedicate it to Love Journey! God Bless 🙂
Thank You Gabby, for helping me with the title of the poem! I love how you don’t mind giving me title ideas! God Bless You 🙂
🙂
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Russell,
Stranger where have you been hiding? I do hope all is well on your end! God Bless 🙂
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What a beautiful poem for a rough draft, I just love it PJ! Those Music Men are special and very much one of a kind and that’s speaking from experience of course. I was so blessed with Dave being a Music Man, too. That could be the title “My Music Man”, it’s a thought anyway. Afraid it’s getting late and sleep is calling to me, too! 🙂
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Thank You for your kind words Gabby! I know what you mean! I love hearing about your love Dave 🙂 I slept good, I so need’d it! I believe I’ll change the title to what you suggested! so thank you for always encourging me with title! God Bless 🙂
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ahhh, PJ, this is very beautiful!
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Thank You, I keep rereading it and felt like something was missing from it besides the title! I do hope all is well on your end! God Bless 🙂
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I love it 😀
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Thank You Sherline! God Bless 🙂
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Beautiful! 🙂
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Aww ty, I do hope all is well on your end! God Bless 🙂
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Love love. wouldn’t change a thing.
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Thank You for your comment! Many Blessings 🙂
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Our Music Man is the Man of the Music of the Spheres, oh yes, He is! This poem is quite successful! Congratulations!
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Thank You Granbee! I thought I need’d to add more or redo it, but after reading so many time’s it sound good the way it is! Many Blessings 🙂
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the piece is so lovely and well penned PJ, I love it… 🙂
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Thank You 🙂
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Just lovely, PJ, and I love the title, too! 🙂
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Thank you Lauren! Hope all is well on your end! God Bless
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